Focus Group Feedback:

Focus Group Feedback:

In one of the media lessons we had a showing of all of the groups documentaries. After the showing of the film there was some feedback given to me on how to improve the rough-cut film.

One point that was raised was to add some more shots of the van. There weren’t many shots of the van in the rough cut and the audience couldn’t visualise Ray moving through the night. Also a suggestion of adding POV shots could improve the visual experience. The viewer could then see where Ray was going and where he was passing through during the night. The film could possibly also do with some recorded sounds such as the hitting of milk bottles, engine sound and traffic sounds. The cutaway shots should also be the same kind of colours as the rest of the film and not be to bright and stand out as the other shots are dark and were shot in low light during the night. The class were aware of the language used and they were not affected by the language used by Ray during the film. The language used did create some laughter in the viewing as what Ray was quite entertaining. 

BBFC Classification:

Bbfc letter from Charlie Hall

BBFC:

The BBFC is an in dependent, non-governmental body which has classified in cinema films. They also provide age ratings for the films released. The ratings are U, PG and 12A. BBFC are a designated body which means they have the legal powers to rate films and even cut or reject the work before released.

History of BBFC:

The BBFC was created in 1912 and was created by a group of members of the film industry. They manage their own censorship instead of the national or local government. This began on the 1st January 1913. The object was to create a company which could make their own judgements that were acceptable nationally. For this to take ahead the BBFC needed to earn the trust of the Parliament, the press and the public. It wanted to make sure all the films, were checked and up to standard.

The current Council membership consists of:

Graham Lee
Steve Jaggs
Sonita Alleyne
0Maggie Carver
Joanna Shaw
Jonathan Teckman.

Different Ratings:

The BBFC rate the films before they are released in the cinemas:

- U

- PG

- 12A

- 15

- 18

The rating for U and PG mean that anyone can go and see these films. Children don't need to be accompanied by an adult; they can view it with friends.  PG is a rating so your parents can think about weather this film is suitable for you, this is if you are younger then 8 or 9 years of age. The rating for 12A means your must be older then 12 to go and see them unless you have an adult with you. There are some films that are rated as a 15. These films normally included violence and sex references. Then there are 18 rated films which include violence, sex and sometimes drug use. Local councils who are in charge of the cinemas around the whole country have grew to accept the BBFC's decisions, even though from this day for the films shown in our cinemas, the council still have to power to ignore the decisions made by the BBFC.

Legal. 

The BBFC have no legal power, the films have to be submitted for classifications to the council who have the final say for the certificates. For example a film maybe recommended to be a 12A but it may end up being rated at a 15. Not everyone will agree but each film has to have an official rating.

Coraline. 

BBFC guidelines for junior categories notes that PG have some scary moments in the and may frighten younger children. Coraline arrived at the BBFC with a PG rating as it is based around a children's book and is a stop motion animation. At PG the BBFC guidelines allow some elements of horror as long as it meets the criteria which is there is not to many frightening scenes in the film.Not all parents agreed with the PG classification for Coraline but it could have been a 15 for horror and PG for language so the decision was made to give the film a rating of PG.

Feedback on Pitch:

Pitch Feedback:

I have had some feedback on my pitch form two guys at the Cambridge Cinema Shorts and my teacher in Media. There were some points that were raised that could improve the idea. 

Points that were raised:

• Carry out a sit down type of interview instead of filming Ray whilst he is doing his job throughout the night. 
• Another point that was mentioned was to film some other workers at the dairy and not to just concentrate on Ray.
•  I could also go out and film Ray whilst he isn't filming and see what he gets up to with his family and in his free time. 
• Overall, the points that were raised could add improvements to the idea and possibly make a better documentary film. 

Royalty Free Soundtracks

Royalty Free Music:

At the start of my documentary there is a 30 second section which shows the yard at night and there is very little sound. I have decided to add a soundtrack for the first 30 odd seconds before the titles appear. Online there are many websites with Royalty free sounds but some are better than others. I have found 3 soundtracks that i like but i am not sure on which one to choose, but i have downloaded all three anyway. 

Below is a screenshot that shows i can legally use the music in my project. 

Research into Final Credits

I have been researching into the end credits for my documentary and have been using Google Images to see what other people and companies have been using. One reason i have been looking at other images is to see what i think works and what doesn't work so well. 

Below is a screenshot from what i have been looking at:

Re-Shooting 26/10/14

Tonight I am going out with Ray again to shoot some more shots for my documentary. The plan for the shoot is to concentrate on getting shots of the van passing through the night as i don't currently have many shots of the van.