Pitch
Feedback:
I have had some feedback on my pitch form two guys at the Cambridge Cinema Shorts and my teacher in Media. There were some points that were raised that could improve the idea.
Points that were raised:
- Carry out a sit down type of interview instead of filming Ray whilst he is doing his job throughout the night.
- Another point that was mentioned was to film some other workers at the dairy and not to just concentrate on Ray.
- I could also go out and film Ray whilst he isn't filming and see what he gets up to with his family and in his free time.
- Overall, the points that were raised could add improvements to the idea and possibly make a better documentary film.
Royalty Free Music:
At the start of my documentary there is a 30 second section which shows the yard at night and there is very little sound. I have decided to add a soundtrack for the first 30 odd seconds before the titles appear. Online there are many websites with Royalty free sounds but some are better than others. I have found 3 soundtracks that i like but i am not sure on which one to choose, but i have downloaded all three anyway.
Below is a screenshot that shows i can legally use the music in my project.
I have been researching into the end credits for my documentary and have been using Google Images to see what other people and companies have been using. One reason i have been looking at other images is to see what i think works and what doesn't work so well.
Below is a screenshot from what i have been looking at:
