Focus Group Feedback:

Focus Group Feedback:

In one of the media lessons we had a showing of all of the groups documentaries. After the showing of the film there was some feedback given to me on how to improve the rough-cut film.

One point that was raised was to add some more shots of the van. There weren’t many shots of the van in the rough cut and the audience couldn’t visualise Ray moving through the night. Also a suggestion of adding POV shots could improve the visual experience. The viewer could then see where Ray was going and where he was passing through during the night. The film could possibly also do with some recorded sounds such as the hitting of milk bottles, engine sound and traffic sounds. The cutaway shots should also be the same kind of colours as the rest of the film and not be to bright and stand out as the other shots are dark and were shot in low light during the night. The class were aware of the language used and they were not affected by the language used by Ray during the film. The language used did create some laughter in the viewing as what Ray was quite entertaining.